Please help me to correct grammar mistake in short email.. Dear Chegg people, Hi
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Please help me to correct grammar mistake in short email..Dear Chegg people, Hi, I am ESL student, and I am sending the email to college Admission office to ask the questions about application..
I apologize for Horrible grammar.. I am still working on it, but English is very hard.. If anyone can help me, please correct my grammar and sentence structure.. I will be sincerely appriciate for your help.. ^^
* the attached photo is just for reference for understanding my email..
I hope you have a great day!
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Dear ### Admission committee,
Good afternoon!
My name is Mel and I am applying to Industrial design program in Georgia tech as a transfer student. Ga tech is my dream school so it is so honored to apply this school.
Recently I noticed that the industrial design program accepting portfolio as optional in the admission process, so I would love to submit my portfolio.
Since there are 2 different admission dead line that application available date is August 1 ~ September 15, and document dead line is Oct. 1st, and
I also noticed that there are statement in the description of the instruction for portfolio that, " Once material are uploaded, you will have the opportunity to "Edit Details"of that item in the "Your Portfoilo" tab. "
I would like to be advised that is this mean I can have more time to edit (or adding) more pieces after submitting my application electronically, which will be before september 15 through the date of document dead line, Oct. 1st?
I am working on few of projects right now, and If the opportunity given, I would be very appreciate to put this project in my portfolio for this application.
I appreciate for having time to read this email, and I hope you have a great day!
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Decision Credit DeadlineDate(s) Oct. 1 Application Application Document Term Course Requirement Evaluation Notification Deposit Deadline(s) Available Deadline(S) Deadline Oct. 1 Aug. 1- Sept. 15 Nov. 1 Dec. 1 Spring
Explanation / Answer
The correct version is below.
Dear ### Admission committee,
Good afternoon
My name is Mel and I am applying to Industrial design program in Georgia tech as a transfer student. Georgia tech is my dream school so it is so honor to apply this school.
Recently I noticed that the industrial design program accepting portfolio as optional in the admission process, so I would love to submit my portfolio.
Since there are, two different admissions deadline that application available date is August 1 to September 15 and document dead line is October 1. Moreover, I also noticed that there are statement in the description of the instruction for portfolio that, “Once material are uploaded, you will have the opportunity to "Edit Details” of that item in the "Your Portfolio" tab.”
I would like to be advised that is this mean I can have more time to edit (or adding) more pieces after submitting my application electronically, which will be before September 15 through the date of document dead line, October 1.
I am working on few of projects right now, and if the opportunity given, I would be very appreciate to put this project in my portfolio for this application.
I appreciate for having time to read this email, and I hope you have a great day!