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I have this speech i wanted someone to go through and add a few more nice things

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I have this speech i wanted someone to go through and add a few more nice things that would enhance the speech, dont have to edit it just add additional information based on context to say more nice things about people and food and etc..

Here is the speech.

Good evening everyone,

Ladies and gentleman and their families .
This is our first convention of NAPVA in Missisaga Ontario and we are happy to have you here tonight on this beautiful evening to join us in the growth of this organization. Please enjoy this evening and again thank you everyone so much for being here.

We will start our program with the name of Allah and i would like to call Muhammad Ali for the brief reciting of the Quaran along with its translation.
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I would like to call on stage a very honarable senior veterinarian who was ex-president of Washington Veterinary Medical Association. Dr Hammid Mughual to introduce the chairman of NAPVA.
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Besides myself and Dr. Khalid Munir there are other pillars who helped build NAPVA and get it to where it is today. We are proud of all the members and their dedication to the organization. The first Shahid Amin, Professor Kazim Chahan, Dr. Muhhamad Ashraf , Dr Muhhamad Atar, Dr. Farrukh Nazir, Dr. Mahhamad Asad Malik, Dr. Arif Saleem Memon , Dr. Javaid Chaudhry. They have done a wonderful job over the years of building NAPVA and put alot of effort and dedication into this organization.
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I would like to call on the stage a very honorable senior veterinarian who was ex- president of Chicago Veterinary medical association Dr. Ajaz Alvi. Please join us on stage to share a few words about NAPVA.
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No doubt everyone works very hard from canada board of directors but Dr. Zahid Hussain I want to thank you especially for your dedication and endless support.
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I would like to play a video message from VC Lahore Veterinary University from Dr. Talat Pasha this is a message for NAPVA organization and all of the members.
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There is another message for NAPVA from Dr. Randawa, the Dean of the University of Agriculture Faslabad.
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Please take a 15 minute break for prayer.
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Food anouncement, we want to thank everyone who put theese meals together and we want you and your family to go ahead and enjoy this great meal, entertainment will follow. Thank you again everyone.
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We want to thank our sponsor Raymax Xray ! thank you for believing and contributing to our organization.
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Explanation / Answer

about Raymax Xray :

RAYMAX offers affordable equipment for medical, chiropractic and veterinary clinics. It has devices that provide high quality images, which are sold worldwide, for over 25 years. They are always improving the quality of their systems and the integration of the latest technology. Their slogan is "Let Raymax imaging equipment show you what lies beyond ..." details That "what lies beyond". In addition to the standard product line, Raymax also has custom manufacturing of equipment according to the needs and specifications of customers. Professionals and their patients can follow a healthy lifestyle as a result of equipment of high quality images Raymax.

about Dr. Alvi:

Dr. Alvi, was the owner Alvi Veterinary Hospital in Summitt, Ill., Since 1980. He is an active member of veterinary medical associations and has served as the executive secretary of the Academy of Veterinary Medicine Illinois for over a decade.
Dr. Alvi belongs to the Society for Laser Surgery Veterinary Medicine, and the Health Center at the University of Cornell Feline.
He received in 2002, the prestigious Service Award from the University of Illinois, for his service to the veterinary profession.

about Dr. Talat Pasha

Dr. Talat Pasha has been Meritorious Professor and Vice Chancellor of the University of Veterinary and Animal Sciences, since December 2011. He studied at West Virginia University, Morgontown, WV, USA, obtaining the title of Doctor of Philosophy (Ph.D. .), Animal Nutrition.
Dr. Talat Pasha is an expert in dairy products, animal nutrition, veterinary medicine and the animal welfare.He has over 30 years of teaching, research and administration experience.He is member of Advanced Studies Research Board of University of Agriculture, Faisalabad, Institute of Industrial Biotechnology, GC University, Lahore and Member Executive Committee, Punjab Agricultural Research Board.

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