Can someone please help me proofread my homework. I feel like some of my sentenc
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Question
Can someone please help me proofread my homework. I feel like some of my sentences sound I little awkward. Thank you in advance for your help and please excuse my poor English.
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1)The human population in this planet has become so high and it's growing so rapidly to the point that the planet is incapable of providing enough resources to contain us. We keep reproducing without having any population plan or even spend a minute to think about that for our future generations. If this growing rate continues to increase at this speed, the earth will soon run out of resources, there won't be a beautiful home in a couple of next decades.
Children are incredibly time consuming, of course this is not to be negative about children but you need to have a lot of spare time to:
1. Make sure their clean, both in terms of clothing and personal hygiene.
2. To help them with things like home-work, reading and writing.
3. Very small children want to play a lot; and that is natural, most of us
learn through play. I wonder how many builders out there started their
passion for being a builder through playing with Lego, or
simple wooden building blocks.
I’m not going to lie. Sometimes I do feel a little guilt for not wanting to have children and as much as people say I shouldn’t feel guilty for not wanting to have children, the reality is the cultural norms and standards of society say that I should want to have children. The pressures to procreate and live a “meaningful” life by having children are incredible. There are very few voices in popular culture speaking about the joys of a life without children. Also, I feel bad when I think about my mom. Her dream has always been to have grandchildren. She’s always telling me “Mira le voy a tejer unos zaptitos asi a tus hijitos”
Explanation / Answer
The human population on this planet has become so high and it's growing so rapidly to the point that the planet is incapable of providing enough resources to contain us. We keep reproducing without having any population plan or even spend a minute to think about that for our future generations. If this growth rate continues to increase at this speed, the earth will soon run out of resources, there won't be a beautiful home in a couple of next decades.
Children are incredibly time-consuming, of course, this is not to be negative about children but you need to have a lot of spare time to:
1. Make sure they are clean, both in terms of clothing and personal hygiene.
2. To help them with things like homework, reading, and writing.
3. Very small children want to play a lot, and that is natural, most of us learn through play. I wonder how many builders out there started their passion for being a builder through playing with Lego or simple wooden building blocks.
I’m not going to lie. Sometimes I do feel a little guilty for not wanting to have children and as much as people say I shouldn’t feel guilty for not wanting to have children, the reality is the cultural norms and standards of society say that I should have children. The pressures to procreate and live a “meaningful” life by having children are incredible. There are very few voices in popular culture speaking about the joys of a life without children. Also, I feel bad when I think about my mom. Her dream has always been to have grandchildren. She always tells me “Mira le voy a tejer unos zaptitos asi a tus hijitos”