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Memo Instructions Revise the paragraph (below/in bold), it\'s an announcement to

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Memo Instructions

Revise the paragraph (below/in bold), it's an announcement to current employees notifying them of new openings within a company. Add a topic sentence, improve the organization, and correct the problems in parallelism. Add transitional expressions if appropriate.  HINT:  Here’s a possible topic sentence: A number of high-level positions are now available to current employees.

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You may be interested in applying for a new position within the company. The Human Resources Department has a number of jobs available immediately. The positions are at a high level. Current employees may apply immediately for open positions in production, for some in marketing, and jobs in administration support are also available. To make application, these positions require immediate action. Come to the Human Resources Department. We have a list showing the open positions, what the qualifications are, and job descriptions are shown. Many of the jobs are now open. That’s why we are announcing this now. To be hired, an interview must be scheduled within the next two weeks.

Explanation / Answer

We are hiring current employees for high level positions in the company!

Openings have come up in the company for high level position jobs in departments of production, marketing and administration. We are looking out the deserving candidates from the current employees of the company. Interested candidates are can get details about the positions and its requirements like qualifications and job description from the Human resource department and apply for the jobs accordingly. As this is an immediate requirement, an interview for the same will be scheduled in the nest two weeks. Hence you are requested to get the details of the positions and apply for them at your earliest.